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Hawaii Pacific University tutoring

Get a tutor's written feedback on your own Hawaii Pacific draft, or a study guide that walks you through your program's scoring guides.

  • 7programs supported
  • Draft feedbackon work you wrote
  • Writing tutoringresearch and editing

Your work stays yours

You write every word you submit, and your tutor helps you make it stronger. Your school login, your quizzes and your exams stay with you.

Hawaii Pacific's academic integrity policy and your instructor's guidance come first, and a study guide works for every course.

How a tutor helps

Help that fits how Hawaii Pacific courses are graded: on the scoring guide, criterion by criterion.

Feedback on your draft

You write your paper. Upload it with the scoring guide, and a tutor returns written comments: where it meets each criterion, where it falls short, how your structure and evidence hold up, and what to fix in your APA 7 citations. You make the changes.

  • Each criterion, checked against your draft
  • Where your argument and sources need work
  • APA 7 in-text citations and reference list

Study guides

A guide to your Hawaii Pacific program: how its courses are laid out, what each scoring guide asks for, and how to plan your assessments so nothing catches you late.

  • Your program's courses, in order
  • What each scoring guide rewards
  • A plan for your next assessments

Writing, research and editing tutoring

Work with a tutor on writing, research and editing: from turning a scoring guide into an outline, to choosing peer-reviewed sources, to polishing your draft line by line yourself.

  • Writing: thesis, outline and structure
  • Research: finding and judging sources
  • Editing: clarity, grammar and APA 7

Nursing students send care plans, quality-improvement proposals and evidence summaries; tutors show where each one meets or misses the rubric.

How Hawaii Pacific grades your work

Hawaii Pacific courses grade written work against a rubric: each criterion has its own points or level. Your tutor shows you what each criterion rewards and how to reach the top of it.

What a top-scoring paper has

  • Answers every criterion in the rubric, in order
  • A clear thesis carried through each section
  • Current, scholarly evidence for each claim
  • Analysis that applies the evidence to the case
  • Correct APA 7 citations and references

What you'll write

Assignments Hawaii Pacific students in these programs often write, and the ones tutors help with most:

  • Care plans
  • PICOT questions
  • Evidence-based practice papers

Your Hawaii Pacific program

Hawaii Pacific University has 7 programs in our catalog, from bachelor's to doctoral, most of them in nursing. Examples: BSN to DNP - Adult-Gerontology Acute Care Nurse Practitioner (AGACNP) and MSN - Adult-Gerontology Acute Care Nurse Practitioner (AGACNP).

Nursing 7

  • BSN to DNP - Adult-Gerontology Acute Care Nurse Practitioner (AGACNP)
  • BSN to DNP - Family Nurse Practitioner (FNP)
  • BSN to DNP - Psychiatric Mental Health Nurse Practitioner (PMHNP)
  • MSN - Adult-Gerontology Acute Care Nurse Practitioner (AGACNP)
  • MSN - Family Nurse Practitioner (FNP)
  • MSN - Psychiatric Mental Health Nurse Practitioner (PMHNP)
  • MSN to DNP

Getting started

Three steps, all by text or email.

  1. 1

    Request a tutor

    Use the form on this page; it takes a minute.

  2. 2

    Hear from your tutor

    By text or email, your tutor asks for your draft and scoring guide or your course.

  3. 3

    Learn what to improve

    Your tutor's written feedback shows what each criterion still needs.

Before you start

What does a tutor do with my draft?

Your tutor reads it against your scoring guide and comments on each criterion, your structure, your evidence and your APA 7. You make the revisions, so every word stays yours.

Can a tutor help me with research?

Yes. Your tutor shows you how to search the Hawaii Pacific library databases, choose peer-reviewed sources as current as your course requires, and use the evidence in your argument.

Can a tutor help with editing?

Yes. Your tutor marks grammar, clarity, flow and APA 7 issues in your draft and explains each one, so you can fix them and catch them next time.

How does writing tutoring help?

Your tutor works with you on planning and writing Hawaii Pacific papers: turning the scoring guide into an outline, building each section and citing as you go.

What should I share with my tutor?

Your draft, the assignment instructions and the scoring guide, sent straight to your tutor by text or email. Your Hawaii Pacific login stays with you.

How do I get a study guide?

Choose A study guide in the form and tell us your Hawaii Pacific program and course. Your tutor sends the guide and walks you through it.

Is my draft kept private?

Yes. Your draft and details are shared only with your tutor.